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    Thread: let the boughs b r e a k
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The writer watches all of this unfold with eyes that grow larger and larger, and a mouth that continues to drop open. It was ludicrous how it was all playing out, and yet it was so captivating to watc...
Edwyn The Labyrinth 79 20,814 02-18-2021, 06:14 PM
    Thread: let the boughs b r e a k
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[say]'If it's a boggart...the upgrades won't do anything against it."[/say] Edwyn points out as levelly as he can. Even so, his heart has metaphorically leaped into the back of his throat. In reality,...
Edwyn The Labyrinth 79 20,814 02-16-2021, 09:40 PM
    Thread: let the boughs b r e a k
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All Edwyn can hear is the rush of fluid as it moves through his system. He hears their footfalls easily enough, but he's far too distracted by everything else to notice. [say]"What if...if we can keep...
Edwyn The Labyrinth 79 20,814 02-16-2021, 06:54 PM
    Thread: let the boughs b r e a k
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[say]"But...but what if it <I>is</i> him? I mean..obviously this is a trap, but it might be a trap with <I>real bait</i>. Right?"[/say] He watches as the doctors seamlessly w...
Edwyn The Labyrinth 79 20,814 02-16-2021, 05:23 AM
    Thread: let the boughs b r e a k
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The writer isn't surprised by this unexpected twist. It's what he would have done, were this his story. But this isn't a story, it's <I>reality</I>; normally what is real has the forethoug...
Edwyn The Labyrinth 79 20,814 02-15-2021, 03:48 PM
    Thread: swimming in everything you said
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It did indeed elicit a laugh, a smile thereafter as well. [say]"Quite right! "[/say] Edwyn agrees, once again wishing he was currently holding his notebook and pencil that he might capture Amun's pose...
Edwyn Military Barracks 13 5,185 11-11-2020, 01:49 AM
    Thread: swimming in everything you said
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[say]"I had, a few times actually. Perhaps I should."[/say] Edwyn doesn't sound entirely certain about the idea, but he's far too polite and unsure of what his future holds to turn it down. [say]"Are ...
Edwyn Military Barracks 13 5,185 11-10-2020, 09:27 PM
    Thread: swimming in everything you said
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[say]"Well, it certainly has become...easier? I wouldn't say I have more muse, but certainly there are fewer distractions to take me away from my writing."[/say] Edwyn supplies. [say]"I do have to wor...
Edwyn Military Barracks 13 5,185 11-10-2020, 08:58 PM
    Thread: Ode to the Modern Man
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As Nate relaxes, Edwyn offers a smile that coats his entire expression in something sticky and sweet, as if <I>he's</i> the one who is relieved that he hasn't riled or otherwise offended t...
Edwyn The Spire 8 3,684 11-10-2020, 08:10 PM
    Thread: Ode to the Modern Man
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Edwyn flinches, though allows the book to be taken. <I>Well</i>, allows is a bit of a stretch; Nate is far faster and stronger, and with an obvious advantage here. It's rather like taking ...
Edwyn The Spire 8 3,684 11-10-2020, 06:33 PM
    Thread: Ode to the Modern Man
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Nate really <I>is</i> something. The shadows slide off of him like oil in water, almost beading away as if he's too black, too <I>dark</i> for them. As if they mean to fill in ...
Edwyn The Spire 8 3,684 11-04-2020, 05:48 PM
    Thread: Ode to the Modern Man
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Nate is absolutely being followed. That isn't to say that Edwyn is doing a particularly <I>good</i> job of it, despite the fact that he's comically creeping from tree to tree, hiding behin...
Edwyn The Spire 8 3,684 11-02-2020, 07:01 PM
    Thread: swimming in everything you said
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[say]"How about...<I>you</i> define problem, and I'll tell you if I agree."[/say] The writer quips back with a triumphant smile, nearly winking his approval at Amun's verbal lob back befor...
Edwyn Military Barracks 13 5,185 10-30-2020, 02:59 AM
    Thread: swimming in everything you said
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[say]"Touche."[/say] Edwyn chuckles. He doesn't flinch as he's punched, so much as he wilts into the pressure. It's not a secret that the writer would absolutely subscribe to a lifestyle of the pen be...
Edwyn Military Barracks 13 5,185 10-29-2020, 06:57 PM
    Thread: swimming in everything you said
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[say]"I never said it was a <I>bar</i>."[/say] Edwyn points out with a chuckle, clearly pleased that Amun had picked up on the type of joke he was going for though. [say]"But now that you ...
Edwyn Military Barracks 13 5,185 10-16-2020, 04:36 PM
    Thread: swimming in everything you said
Post: swimming in everything you said

Cheerful and chipper as ever, Edwyn approaches the barracks with a strange familiarity. He's been here before, and would have looked just as out of place then. But it's important for writers to know a...
Edwyn Military Barracks 13 5,185 10-16-2020, 02:52 PM
    Thread: wrecked land and hope
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[say]"True, they are."[/say] Edwyn responds reasonably enough. [say]"But they aren't the only ones. And they aren't always <I>good</i> ones, at that."[/say] Many noble things had been done...
Edwyn Ahi Coast 18 5,585 10-16-2020, 01:24 AM
    Thread: wrecked land and hope
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Ahh, do be careful writer. Jack doesn't invite just <I>anyone</i> aboard the Ark. But of course you wouldn't know that, would you? As you were. [say]"A ship I believe I can survive."[/say...
Edwyn Ahi Coast 18 5,585 10-11-2020, 03:38 PM
    Thread: wrecked land and hope
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Edwyn doesn't decide, not bothered about what Jack thinks of him either way. Not because he's so confident in himself that it doesn't matter, but simply because he more than accepts that others can fo...
Edwyn Ahi Coast 18 5,585 10-10-2020, 11:06 PM
    Thread: wrecked land and hope
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[say]"Why not? It seems selfish just to care about the deaths of those I'm personally acquainted with, doesn't it?"[/say] Indeed Edwyn <I>is</i> in for it. Especially without the burdens o...
Edwyn Ahi Coast 18 5,585 10-10-2020, 09:21 PM


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