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Kheelan Raine - Mad Hatter - 06-14-2019
Kheelan https://cotf-rpg.com/member.php?action=profile&uid=232
My character is a: Fae
My character is a: Natural
My character's profession is: Great forest guard/singer & music player
Age and season of birth: 67, Leafchange
Stat distribution (You have 35 points to distribute. 10/10/10/5 is a fairly standard array)
Endurance 6
Strength 5
Dexterity 12
Luck 12
RE: Kheelan Raine - Odd - 06-14-2019
Hey!
Just a few things.
You need to earn companions IC (or purchase them with MP), so he wouldn't be able to have a spriggan companion. Also, the wording of this, "..and has a magical voice that stun most people listening to him." sounds like actual magic. This is something you can earn IC, so I'd prefer if this wording was changed so that it doesn't seem like he has actual magic (yet!) Finally, 5"4 is quite tall for a fae, given that anything over 5" is rare.
RE: Kheelan Raine - Mad Hatter - 06-14-2019
Okay, updated and tweaked, better? :)
RE: Kheelan Raine - Odd - 06-14-2019
There's still the Spriggan bit!
RE: Kheelan Raine - Mad Hatter - 06-14-2019
God Darn it! I thoght I took it away! Must have hopped back when I ctrl+Zd a misshap! xD
RE: Kheelan Raine - Mad Hatter - 06-14-2019
Okay, now? lol I already feel hopeless xD
RE: Kheelan Raine - Odd - 06-14-2019
Good to go!