Kheelan Raine

Age: 0 | Height: | Race: OOC Account | Nationality: Natural
Level: - Strg: - Dext: - Endr: - Luck:
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#1
Kheelan https://cotf-rpg.com/member.php?action=profile&uid=232
My character is a: Fae
My character is a: Natural
My character's profession is: Great forest guard/singer & music player
Age and season of birth: 67, Leafchange

Stat distribution (You have 35 points to distribute. 10/10/10/5 is a fairly standard array)
Endurance 6
Strength 5
Dexterity 12
Luck 12
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Incredible Incredulator
Age: 30 | Height: smol | Race: Attuned | Nationality: Outlander
Level: 0 - Strg: 108 - Dext: 42 - Endr: 8 - Luck: 4
Mowgli - Mythical - Crazy fire-breathing horse
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#2
Hey!

Just a few things.

You need to earn companions IC (or purchase them with MP), so he wouldn't be able to have a spriggan companion. Also, the wording of this, "..and has a magical voice that stun most people listening to him." sounds like actual magic. This is something you can earn IC, so I'd prefer if this wording was changed so that it doesn't seem like he has actual magic (yet!) Finally, 5"4 is quite tall for a fae, given that anything over 5" is rare.

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Okay, updated and tweaked, better? Smile
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Incredible Incredulator
Age: 30 | Height: smol | Race: Attuned | Nationality: Outlander
Level: 0 - Strg: 108 - Dext: 42 - Endr: 8 - Luck: 4
Mowgli - Mythical - Crazy fire-breathing horse
Played by: Odd Offline
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Posts: 452
MP:95
#4
There's still the Spriggan bit!

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God Darn it! I thoght I took it away! Must have hopped back when I ctrl+Zd a misshap! xD

Age: 0 | Height: | Race: OOC Account | Nationality: Natural
Level: - Strg: - Dext: - Endr: - Luck:
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Okay, now? lol I already feel hopeless xD
The Best
Incredible Incredulator
Age: 30 | Height: smol | Race: Attuned | Nationality: Outlander
Level: 0 - Strg: 108 - Dext: 42 - Endr: 8 - Luck: 4
Mowgli - Mythical - Crazy fire-breathing horse
Played by: Odd Offline
Change author:
Posts: 452
MP:95
#7
Good to go!


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