our love shines in my heart
Honestly, Zavien was just happy she wasn't holding the bow backwards. That would have been hard to correct gently, but she took the criticisms in stride, bending into the proper form. It would take time and practice for her to look 'comfortable' in the position, so he didn't comment on her strained muscles or awkwardness, letting his eyes follow the arrow as it left her bow.
He grinned wide as he said, "Good. Now we just have to pull it a little tighter and aim." Winking, he handed her another arrow from the pile while they waited for Mittens to retrieve the other. Once she'd knocked it, he tapped her gently on the cheek, just below her big brown eye. "This is where your fletching should be. That way when you shoot, it goes where you're looking."
He grinned wide as he said, "Good. Now we just have to pull it a little tighter and aim." Winking, he handed her another arrow from the pile while they waited for Mittens to retrieve the other. Once she'd knocked it, he tapped her gently on the cheek, just below her big brown eye. "This is where your fletching should be. That way when you shoot, it goes where you're looking."
Zavien
as the sun that shines upon the earth
