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Kheelan Raine
Mad Hatter
 

Age: 0 | Height: | Race: OOC Account | Citizenship: Hollowed Grounds | Level:
STR: - DEX: - END: - LUCK: - ARC: - INT: - HP: 0 - BASE ROLL: 0
Played by: Nova
Posts: 6 | Total: 6
MP: 0

#1
06-14-2019, 05:33 AM
Kheelan https://cotf-rpg.com/member.php?action=profile&uid=232
My character is a: Fae
My character is a: Natural
My character's profession is: Great forest guard/singer & music player
Age and season of birth: 67, Leafchange

Stat distribution (You have 35 points to distribute. 10/10/10/5 is a fairly standard array)
Endurance 6
Strength 5
Dexterity 12
Luck 12
Odd
 The Best
Incredible Incredulator
Age: 101 | Height: smol | Race: Attuned | Citizenship: Halo | Level: 0
STR: 108 - DEX: 42 - END: 8 - LUCK: 4 - ARC: 100 - INT: - HP: 0 - BASE ROLL: 46
Mowgli - Mythical - Crazy fire-breathing horse
Played by: Odd
Posts: 1,872 | Total: 24,520
MP: 6334

#2
06-14-2019, 07:28 AM (This post was last modified: 06-14-2019, 07:31 AM by Odd.)
Hey!

Just a few things.

You need to earn companions IC (or purchase them with MP), so he wouldn't be able to have a spriggan companion. Also, the wording of this, "..and has a magical voice that stun most people listening to him." sounds like actual magic. This is something you can earn IC, so I'd prefer if this wording was changed so that it doesn't seem like he has actual magic (yet!) Finally, 5"4 is quite tall for a fae, given that anything over 5" is rare.
Mad Hatter
 

Age: 0 | Height: | Race: OOC Account | Citizenship: Hollowed Grounds | Level:
STR: - DEX: - END: - LUCK: - ARC: - INT: - HP: 0 - BASE ROLL: 0
Played by: Nova
Posts: 6 | Total: 6
MP: 0

#3
06-14-2019, 07:48 AM
Okay, updated and tweaked, better? :)
Odd
 The Best
Incredible Incredulator
Age: 101 | Height: smol | Race: Attuned | Citizenship: Halo | Level: 0
STR: 108 - DEX: 42 - END: 8 - LUCK: 4 - ARC: 100 - INT: - HP: 0 - BASE ROLL: 46
Mowgli - Mythical - Crazy fire-breathing horse
Played by: Odd
Posts: 1,872 | Total: 24,520
MP: 6334

#4
06-14-2019, 07:49 AM
There's still the Spriggan bit!
Mad Hatter
 

Age: 0 | Height: | Race: OOC Account | Citizenship: Hollowed Grounds | Level:
STR: - DEX: - END: - LUCK: - ARC: - INT: - HP: 0 - BASE ROLL: 0
Played by: Nova
Posts: 6 | Total: 6
MP: 0

#5
06-14-2019, 07:50 AM
God Darn it! I thoght I took it away! Must have hopped back when I ctrl+Zd a misshap! xD
Mad Hatter
 

Age: 0 | Height: | Race: OOC Account | Citizenship: Hollowed Grounds | Level:
STR: - DEX: - END: - LUCK: - ARC: - INT: - HP: 0 - BASE ROLL: 0
Played by: Nova
Posts: 6 | Total: 6
MP: 0

#6
06-14-2019, 07:53 AM
Okay, now? lol I already feel hopeless xD
Odd
 The Best
Incredible Incredulator
Age: 101 | Height: smol | Race: Attuned | Citizenship: Halo | Level: 0
STR: 108 - DEX: 42 - END: 8 - LUCK: 4 - ARC: 100 - INT: - HP: 0 - BASE ROLL: 46
Mowgli - Mythical - Crazy fire-breathing horse
Played by: Odd
Posts: 1,872 | Total: 24,520
MP: 6334

#7
06-14-2019, 08:21 AM
Good to go!
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